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miércoles, 9 de mayo de 2012

THE PLANET CRIMINOLIA

As a president of Criminolia, the measures that could transform my country in a peaceful place are based in educative projects and major and better work conditions. Most of problems of Criminolia are related with those troubles. For becoming my objectives real, its important set up different pedagogical strategies for transforming the population mentality such as informative and formative chattings, themselves auto control, punishment politics and other special activities around it. 


Other important measure that I´m going to propose is get stronger the police and other authorities in strict staff selection.


miércoles, 2 de mayo de 2012

love poem

what´s love?

...And then I ask myself 
why is everybody only thinking about oneself?
and where is love when someone screams?
" I love my girlfriend!, your ex girlfriend!
I mean everyone is talking about love

by Sandra Loká




Wind blows in my soul as flower breath
screaming to the skies where is love
love is the gate that opens as a measure of time
  pettings and hugs are inside of me
  Where are beholding by the look of the moon 

miércoles, 25 de abril de 2012


FOLK TALE ASSIGMENT RUBRIC
CINDERELLA


CATEGORY

4

3

2

1

TOTAL



Organization
The story is
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out
of place. Clear
transitions are used.
The story is
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out
of place. Clear
transitions are
used.
The story is a
little hard to
follow. The
transitions are
sometimes not clear.
Ideas and
scenes seem to
be randomly
arranged.



3


Elements of
Folk Tales
At least three of
the elements of
folk tales
discussed in
class are
included in the story.
Two of the
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class are
included in the story.
Only one of the
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class are
included in the story.
There are no
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class
included in the story.



3

Spelling and
Punctuation
There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors in the final draft.
There is one
spelling or
punctuation
error in the final draft.
There are two - three
spelling
and punctuation
errors in the final draft.
The final draft
has more than
three spelling
and punctuationerrors.


2

Neatness
The final draft
of the story is
readable, clean,
neat and
attractive. It is
free of erasures
and crossed-out
words. It looks
like the author
took great pride in it.
The final draft
of the story is
readable, neat
and attractive. It
may have one
or two erasures,
but they are not
distracting. It
looks like the
author took
some pride
in it.
The final draft
of the story is
readable and
some of the
pages are
attractive. It
looks like parts
of it might have
been done in a hurry.
The final draft is
not neat or
attractive. It
looks like the
student just
wanted to get it
done and didn't
care what it looked like.



3

TOTAL

11
TEACHERS
COMMENTS
THIS TALE SHOW US THE IMPORTANCE OF DON´T BE JELAOUS WITH ANYBODY



FOLK TALE ASSIGMENT RUBRIC
LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD

CATEGORY

4

3

2

1

TOTAL



Organization
The story is
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out
of place. Clear
transitions are used.
The story is
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out
of place. Clear
transitions are
used.
The story is a
little hard to
follow. The
transitions are
sometimes not clear.
Ideas and
scenes seem to
be randomly
arranged.




3


Elements of
Folk Tales
At least three of
the elements of
folk tales
discussed in
class are
included in the story.
Two of the
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class are
included in the story.
Only one of the
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class are
included in the story.
There are no
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class
included in the story.



3

Spelling and
Punctuation
There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors in the final draft.
There is one
spelling or
punctuation
error in the final draft.
There are two - three
spelling
and punctuation
errors in the final draft.
The final draft
has more than
three spelling
and punctuation errors.


2

Neatness
The final draft
of the story is
readable, clean,
neat and
attractive. It is
free of erasures
and crossed-out
words. It looks
like the author
took great pride in it
The final draft
of the story is
readable, neat
and attractive. It
may have one
or two erasures,
but they are not
distracting. It
looks like the
author took
some pride
in it.
The final draft
of the story is
readable and
some of the
pages are
attractive. It
looks like parts
of it might have
been done in a hurry.
The final draft is
not neat or
attractive. It
looks like the
student just
wanted to get it
done and didn't
care what it looked like.




3

TOTAL

11

TEACHERS
COMMENTS
THE IMPORTANCE OF FOLLOW INDICATIONS FROM ADULTS


FOLK TALE ASSIGMENT RUBRIC
PINOCCHIO

CATEGORY

4

3

2

1

TOTAL




Organization
The story is
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out
of place. Clear
transitions are used.
The story is
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out
of place. Clear
transitions are
used.
The story is a
little hard to
follow. The
transitions are
sometimes not clear.
Ideas and
scenes seem to
be randomly
arranged.



3



Elements of
Folk Tales
At least three of
the elements of
folk tales
discussed in
class are
included in the story.
Two of the
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class are
included in the story.
Only one of the
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class are
included in the story.
There are no
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class
included in the story.



3


Spelling and
Punctuation
There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors in the final draft.
There is one
spelling or
punctuation
error in the final draft.
There are two - three
spelling
and punctuation
errors in the final draft.
The final draft
has more than
three spelling
and punctuation errors.


2


Neatness
The final draft
of the story is
readable, clean,
neat and
attractive. It is
free of erasures
and crossed-out
words. It looks
like the author
took great pride in it.
The final draft
of the story is
readable, neat
and attractive. It
may have one
or two erasures,
but they are not
distracting. It
looks like the
author took
some pride
in it.
The final draft
of the story is
readable and
some of the
pages are
attractive. It
looks like parts
of it might have
been done in a hurry.
The final draft is
not neat or
attractive. It
looks like the
student just
wanted to get it
done and didn't
care what it looked like.





3


TOTAL

11

TEACHERS
COMMENTS
THE IMPORTANCE OF BE HONEST WITH PEOPLE YOU LOVE

  
FOLK TALE ASSIGMENT RUBRIC
ALADDIN


CATEGORY

4

3

2

1

TOTAL




Organization
The story is
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out
of place. Clear
transitions are used.
The story is
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out
of place. Clear
transitions are
used.
The story is a
little hard to
follow. The
transitions are
sometimes not clear.
Ideas and
scenes seem to
be randomly
arranged.



3



Elements of
Folk Tales
At least three of
the elements of
folk tales
discussed in
class are
included in the story.
Two of the
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class are
included in the story.
Only one of the
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class are
included in the story.
There are no
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class
included in the story.



3


Spelling and
Punctuation
There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors in the final draft.
There is one
spelling or
punctuation
error in the final draft.
There are two - three
spelling
and punctuation
errors in the final draft.
The final draft
has more than
three spelling
and punctuation errors.


2


Neatness
The final draft
of the story is
readable, clean,
neat and
attractive. It is
free of erasures
and crossed-out
words. It looks
like the author
took great pride in it.
The final draft
of the story is
readable, neat
and attractive. It
may have one
or two erasures,
but they are not
distracting. It
looks like the
author took
some pride
in it.
The final draft
of the story is
readable and
some of the
pages are
attractive. It
looks like parts
of it might have
been done in a hurry.
The final draft is
not neat or
attractive. It
looks like the
student just
wanted to get it
done and didn't
care what it looked like.








3


TOTAL

11

TEACHERS
COMMENTS
CHILDREN HAVE THE FANTASY DOOR OPEN


FOLK TALE ASSIGMENT RUBRIC
RAPUNZEL


CATEGORY

4

3

2

1

TOTAL




Organization
The story is
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out
of place. Clear
transitions are used.
The story is
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out
of place. Clear
transitions are
used.
The story is a
little hard to
follow. The
transitions are
sometimes not clear.
Ideas and
scenes seem to
be randomly
arranged.



3



Elements of
Folk Tales
At least three of
the elements of
folk tales
discussed in
class are
included in the story.
Two of the
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class are
included in the story.
Only one of the
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class are
included in the story.
There are no
elements of folk
tales discussed
in class
included in the story



3


Spelling and
Punctuation
There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors in the final draft.
There is one
spelling or
punctuation
error in the final draft.
There are two - three
spelling
and punctuation
errors in the final draft.
The final draft
has more than
three spelling
and punctuation errors.


2


Neatness
The final draft
of the story is
readable, clean,
neat and
attractive. It is
free of erasures
and crossed-out
words. It looks
like the author
took great pride in it.
The final draft
of the story is
readable, neat
and attractive. It
may have one
or two erasures,
but they are not
distracting. It
looks like the
author took
some pride
in it.
The final draft
of the story is
readable and
some of the
pages are
attractive. It
looks like parts
of it might have
been done in a hurry.
The final draft is
not neat or
attractive. It
looks like the
student just
wanted to get it
done and didn't
care what it looked like.



3


TOTAL

11

TEACHERS
COMMENTS
THIS TALE SHOW US LOVE CONQUER THE ADVERSITY